What a shame, this was going well and then, ta dah, it's unfinished! There is no excuse for this as you have been in class and have had loads of time. You will have to follow the teaching blog to see what's missing and you'll need to identify areas for improvement yourself now although a little hint would be to clarify your new audience and what exactly will happen in the new advert.
Chris,
ReplyDeleteWhat a shame, this was going well and then, ta dah, it's unfinished! There is no excuse for this as you have been in class and have had loads of time. You will have to follow the teaching blog to see what's missing and you'll need to identify areas for improvement yourself now although a little hint would be to clarify your new audience and what exactly will happen in the new advert.
Ellie